27.04.2016 17:09
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I really love this piece, Iris. It reads kinda folksy, with a prose poem/essay kind of narrative vibe. Best of all it not only paints a snapshot of a moment in time, but also tells a poignant story. The only suggestion that might be considered is to drop the very last word at the end (Pilseresc) because I really don’t think it needs it. The last sentence is pretty powerful and beautiful by itself. I think you need to leave it, end it, just that way. Kudos, well done!

27.04.2016 10:10
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26.04.2016 17:07
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